What Happens When You Aren't Looking

I wanted to enter that contest because I liked the prizes and I wanted to draw something. Granted, this looked 305% better in my head, but I don't have the artistic ability to do that right now. I like this pretty decently otherwise though.

Edit: I cleaned up some lighting and added a little more detail. Here's the old one if you want to compare. [link]
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Edit: This is getting an overwhelmingly much better response then I expected. I really appreciate it, all of you! <:

Edit 2: *sweats profusely* gosh guys, you're all so nice and I'm in the spotlight and ugh it's making me nervous. ;;

Edit 3: Thank you all so much! This is the most attention I've had related to my art is quite a while. Entering this contest was a great idea apparently!